I felt like the pacing for Jaehyuk from getting let back into the apartment and them reconciling felt a bit off. No clue why I don't know if it should've taken longer or shorter but it fel like something was wrong
I took a break from this for a while because I didn't like how entitled she felt to her husband's, her child's, he workers trust, love and respect.
just a quick question for readers. Has she run away yet?
A beta gets tangled up in a love triangle between an alpha and (blond) omega (alpha is probably endgame).
The story does too much and feels like it should prioritize it's main cover characters over side characters because everything with the side characters is kinda crappy.
Plus after reading "aitsu no daihonmei" (if you haven't read it at least try getting past Ch18 cause that's when it gets good there is bdsm mention and referenced but not shown plus more of a BL than a yaoi (2%)) I kinda wished they kept the silly tone a bit because when it tried to get serious it fumbling the bag between "complex" relationship and "one person is clearly in the wrong here".
Please read "aitsu no daihnonmei" it's the same ugly loser guy x hot popular guy but the hot popular guy likes him because he was his favourite person growing up because ugly guy was the only one nice to him when he was a fat ugly kid. Most of the side couples are still ass tho like there's a lot of hitting on other people despite being boyfriends. To me it's the better version of this dynamic because of how in love the "seme" is. to add to that the dynamic is "seme" teases, pranks and messes with "uke" while dating him and when that's not happening they're hanging out like friends because they've known each other for awhile and before you think "that's boring" the story puts this regular chill comfortable couple in between OHSHC levels of shenanigans and tomfoolery
Min-jun came to Japan to study and also dreaming of a wonderful gay life. A group of black cars surr...
- Author: Murimi,dupal
- Genres: Webtoons / Yaoi / Smut / Action / Drama
I dropped this
They do a lot of unbelievable Yakuza shit like "the kid isn't allowed to wear colored clothes because he's a Yakuza kid" but why though even if it's for public image he still wears black and white in his house. Plot is really nonsensical and contrived like the disbelief is getting suspended real hard in this one.
The award for the worst drawn Yakuza tattoo in comic history goes to this story right here. Bitch it's cheetah print on a whole ass leg not just the thigh or calves whole ass leg another reader said it looked like an infection or skin condition. It's really distracting during sex scenes or scenes where the seme is supposed to be hot because he made that terrible life choice. This is why when guys have Yakuza tattoos they're cool ass animal ones with detail and colour not fucking animal print you furry.
Is he just gonna bang her for 3 days before she commits suicide. What about their son? These two are terrible people like at least yandere-esq characters care about their family unit and kids. At least be a good father to your son you piece of shit. She's not off the hook either being a neglectful mom is still being a shitty mom. This poor kid is gonna need an isekai protag to fix his trauma and fall in love with him.
writing a believable romance where the characters compliment each other (she and I both have gaps and we fill each others gaps like two halves of a puzzle) or are really compatible.
Manhwa writer: *insert nah drake meme*
There's this inexplicable draw between these two characters and they can't seem to stop their strong feelings of love for one another despite having zero compatibility and knowing/understanding jackshit about each other aka "but daddy I love him" "but why?" "I don't know why I just do despite *insert the worst thing possible to the other character i.e killing parents, physical assault, murder in general, causing a miscarriage"
Manhwa writer: *insert yeah drake meme"
Sometimes the asshole is placed too close to the dick and it looks really awkward. Just my opinion tho.
From xiaojiangworld:In order to support his poor family, the clumsy Banri began working at the Shish...
- Author: Chifuyu
- Genres: Yaoi
Like the art style but there are too many pedophillic undertones to really enjoy it. I didn't realize the uke was underage until I read the comments I thought he was a young adult with a childlike physique because he doesn't go to school or even mention it. The seme has a brother 16-19 year old that's engaged and in love with a toddler that everyone is cool with. The uke's uniform is weird as shit too the amount of mental hurdles to overcome fo you not to just think "make him a butler" and "if he's so bad at his job just fire him" and "why do they have a room for him if all the employees are women? Why isn't there a division of the sexes in the dormitory? Why are all the employees women?". 2 stars because art style.
I feel like the friend is crossing too many boundaries and I know it's supposed to be funny but oh my god there are only so many "can we have a threesome?" And "I'm super horny and have lots of sex with my boyfriend" Jokes you can make
Star got taken away because she copyrighted/patented math and makes people who use her math pay intsallments for using it. She created a subscription service for math. That's not legal and doesn't make sense also capitalism is a plight on society and MC is a greedy capitalist pig. You can't patent a formula because you can't patent math. You can make a theory but oh my god this is a stupid subplot you can't make people pay for it just like you can't make someone pay for using the theory "all living organisms are made of cells" how would you even regulate and keep track of such a thing.
The one thing that made the story unique was the framing device of the girl in between who knew they were in love honestly would've preferred if the three of them became friends(or polyamourous 3 way relationship) or the childhood friends/couple got a friend group whoch would've created more opportunities for entertaining character dynamics and interactions because after a certain point the author/artist abandons the framing device of "girl inbetweens POV" and just sort of gives you interactions of the two boys which is kind of stale and boring when you consider the fact that because of the untraditional introduction we got less attached and accustomed to the love story and the characters which leads to me in particular not caring what happens to the main couple because you know how it's going to play out Ren will be childish while looking like a thug and Tadaomi likes that so he plays into it by being perfect. So yeah real boring wish the concept had better planning and execution because it was really weird when we just cut the outsiders POV out as it felt real generic without the long typical inner monologues of BL in which we learn of characters deep feelings of love and their perspectives on the situation.
Attach the most outlandish and obnoxious uses of 3D you've seen in a comic and some context if it makes it funnier or more WTF. This is more specific to full color manhwas and manhuas but do you guys ever get annoyed that they're so mass produced and rushed that all the backgrounds and props are 3D models especially when it's a more exaggerated st......
I can tell glasses girl is going to be endgame. This has a really interesting hook but oh my god glasses girl is so boring and basic it's annoying. Glasses girl is shy, polite, secretly beautiful when she takes off her glasses so only MC has to fight for her, low self esteem, unathletic, no friends, cute, in love with MC from the shadows(she fell in love with his gardening(wtf),pure and innocent. She has nothing personalised, no personality, no quirks, no hobbies, no friends and who knows maybe the author will give her a brother for the classic trope "Guy gets jealous over guy with main girl but plot twist it's her brother". I just wished she had something to give her some flavour cause she is so bland basic.