I’ve read until chapter 11, Novel readers, does it take a long time for Dane and Grayson to have sex? I’m lowkey impatient because Dane is sooooo fucking sexy! ALSO WHICH CHAPTER IN THE NOVEL DO THEY HAVE SEX
I feel they have integrated a lot of stuff to move the pace because the Novel was long, it's been a while since i read it. I think it might be like atleast 10-16 chapters I presume for the sex part they are going very fast I hope they don't skip Grayson's inner monologue cause that was very important to understand Grayson personality.
I haven’t even read it yet so I wouldn’t know what we’re missing out on. I probably need to tho :/ I’m just not a big novel reader but I am trying to get into them so I can read all the “If You Can” novels. I’m assuming the farther we get into the story it’ll take longer to adapt. It’d be kinda crazy if they just speed run the whole story tbh
I lowkey kinda wished Hayden would’ve pushed Brett away more because it felt so anticlimactic seeing him fold every single time when tensions were just about to peak. Don’t get me wrong I love Brett, he’s such an interesting and beautiful character I’ve read in awhile! But I also want that thrill of seeing him desperate just a little more (maybe it’s just my affection of wanting him to treat his little puppy better). Also I feel like a lot of things are glossed over, especially like the rape scene. And we don’t know a lot of the outcomes of the things that happened. Like what happened to the Korean guy that scott was seeing? What happened to the 3 rapists? What happened to the videos of Brett that were taken? What happened in the 2 years they were separated? The way Hayden acted made it seem like they were only away for a month. I really wanted more impact so it feels a bit frustrating to read from the pace but the characters are 100/10.








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