i don’t understand why she’ll help some kids, like the literal “heavenly demon” who left her to die in the woods, but for that branch family boy, she was like “nah imma wait for him to do something stupid,” which he DID.. but still.. people can die from food poisoning, especially children and older people, and it could’ve EASILY BEEN PREVENTED! isn’t she trying to change the future? did she not help him because his potential wasn’t good enough? that’s fucked lmao
dude (sigmund) was clearly grown (AT LEAAAST 18) by the time he got the fancy sword and became a commoner turned duke- and brunhilde looked like- 10? 12? maybe? sigmunds nephew looks to be about the same age as brunhilde.. e w.. AND DONT EVEN GET ME STARTED ON SIGMUND BEIN AN EMOTIONALLY CONSTIPATED FUCKWAD?! gets all huffy when brunhilde struggles to name all the things he likes about sigmund, but all sigmund says in response is “i like you for you” MY GUY THATS SOME TRASH-TIER UNINVOLVED PARTNER ASS SHIT.. fuckin hypocrite.. ALSO THEY LIIIIITERALLY didn’t even ADDRESS brunhildes fuckin SEXUAL ASSAULT- they just went straight to pound town and forgot about it.. why even include that??
also the power imbalance between them is kinda ick..
does she not have osteoporosis from producing milk for that long?? it’s not like she takes calcium supplements and no, the cow milk she drinks wouldn’t be enough.
also the breast milk kink in and of itself weird as fuck.. was bro neglected as a child? why are you so obsessed with it?? she’s not a fuckin dairy cow
biological father of the ogMC (edwin) and villain (lucian) is a fucking cunt.. he’s a horrible parent, and a lot of his actions don’t make sense- like the author just made the guy bad with no real reasoning behind it.. he neglected his dead wife’s son and now that his side chicks son is in the picture he’s totally fine sending his OWN CHILD TO (potentially) DIE? WHY?! for what reason? to put his bastard as heir? what the fuck do you think is gonna happen to his reign? HES GONNA BE PICKED APART FOR HIS BLOODLINE- HE ALSO DIDNT ASK FOR HIS DEADBEAT DAD TO THRUST THIS POSITION ONTO HIM.. he distrusts the FL.. WHY?! what the fuck did she do? besides PARENTING HIS FUCKING SON?! all the character in this series are bland, and the way they handle conflict is hella unhealthy and lowkey normalizes parentifying children. the world building/conflict is also lame as fuck and half-baked.. why did they need to throw purification type shit in here.. i’m so tired of religion in this shitty isekai romantasy slop comics (づ￣ ³￣)づ
it’s fucking ridiculous! also the way the MC handles lucian’s outbursts sucks. all the kids in this are growing up maladaptive as shit.
but not messy in a fun way- it’s just stupid plot points and forced romance.. it started neat and i liked that the dad wasn’t immediately forgiven.. but then the FL kept getting PUT THROUGH THE FUCKIN WRINGER.. ofc she doesn’t think she matters bc every time she lets her guard down she gets kidnapped, nearly killed, AND considering she wasn’t shown much affection growing up she has an avoidant attachment towards relationships— you gotta learn how someone likes to receive affection then go based off that.
also the blonde mage/cousin is fucking douche.. his personality sucks and i hate that he straight up tries to kill the CHILD prince! that’s fucked! dude got sooo pressed that the prince called him out that he tries to kill him? why is this just so casually included? also the ML (prince, unfortunately) is hella emotionally maladaptive.. and poorly written.. it’s a mess..
and alongside the messy family tree, you have the dragons who want to- kill the MC bc.. uh.. ig she can house the BBEG that her mom and “dad” sealed away? or maybe the golden dragon is just a PDF? tbh- i forgot because there’s so much going on and it’s pretty poorly explained (〜￣△￣)〜
i’m so fucking tired of it- we didn’t even really need to relive the past.. just move ON and go get some cognitive behavioral therapy
i didn’t expect a whole ass mauling from a pretty bland story.. but to be fair this author clearly has a thing for putting our leading lady in harms way- and lowkey romanticizing abuse?? she’s swooning over a man who fucking choked her??
let alone her “family” yeah fuck her brothers, and arguably the whole fucking kingdom/empire because why did not a single person step in to stop the dogs?? her dad sucks, her mom is enabling.. and her cousin is pointlessly vindictive. like ma’am why? if you wanted all the power to yourself it would be easier to just get along with everyone then take ‘em all out at once.. but nooo the author has to have the girls fight over a man..
this is like MESSY MESSY
uwu sorry about ur moms early passing and curse that destroyed ur family.. that was my mom and ur grandpa.. so i wanted to hit it and quit it with a human to see if i’d get cursed (isn’t that self harm?)
also sorry- but tits fucking SUCK to swim with and while they could potentially help with bouyancy, they have so much drag and get in THE WAY. if they were for bouyance they’d have to be able to be shrunk/expanded.. which uh- would be interesting to see..
blondie isn’t even holding the plug right.. it’s literally on top of his fingers??
also.. poor twink.. another story where consent doesn’t matter and it’s only a matter of time before twinkies brain becomes mush, blondie confesses his love, aaaand they end up together
that’s just being a live-in partner.. kidnapping implies a lack of consent as it’s a literal CRIME.. dude got picked up like a stray cat off the street
idk why i read this- authors never fully flesh out charm magic and it fucking sucks because humans would be such an easy species to charm, and explaining biological/physiological effects of that magic on the brain would be soooooo fuckin cool to see.. obvs it’s like drugs, where the person gets addicted to the *high* but at some point the person would “willingly” seek the high go get their fix, even if the charm mage isn’t there.. would there be charm rehab?
why do we gotta slut-shame.. humans are freaky lil bipeds who fuck for FUN.. let alone the countless species who are promiscuous (most common breeding pattern). like BRO, poly relationships EXIST yet get shit on HEAVILY by most genres (or fetishized).
you would thing a dragon, who is often associated with nature and the “natural order” wouldn’t be such a PRUDE
honey badgers are literally from AFRICA.. THEY CAN HANDLE FUCKING HEAT. tbh mustelids (the family of mammals) are metal as shit as literally every member is a highly effective predator. Author couldve EASILY used a wolverine, a cold-adapted POWERHOUSE of a weasel, but no.. if anything the honey badger is bored as fuck as there’s literally no enrichment for him.. poor guy.
it’s rubs me the wrong way with these “i suddenly became a succubus/incubus” stories bc it turns sex- which humans don’t really need aside from pleasure (and reproduction) into something akin to eating, drinking, and sleeping.. also it’s not like our MC had a choice in the matter? it’s like he was roofied by that fuckin creep of a demon (who could’ve easily went and found some gigolo) and then went on to SA the “guy he hates” because he’d die without semen? like c’mon bro.
that’s another thing- the top prob has a crush on the MC but won’t say anything bc of toxic masculinity or some shit, but they’ll bond over demon-roofie sex acts and become lovers in the end (〜￣△￣)〜