I think visiting a clinic might give you better advice but as someone who used to have anemia I will tell you what worked *for me*:
1. I was told to eat green leafy vegetables, stuff like spinach, kale, etc etc, I mostly ate spinach because it's more available where I live, just cooked it with gound beef, sometimes we made soup so I can get some ...... 1 reply
There's a buddhist saying "the finger pointing at the moon is not the moon". Maybe that's what a well written story does: it never gives you the whole truth, only enough to make you look for it.
You see, there's something alluring to a story we read and makes us recognize ourselves in people who never existed. They hold up a mirror without making ...... 6 reply
To me personally, the first thing that makes a story well written is how developed the characters (especially the main character's thoughts and emotions) and relationships between the main characters and others are. I'll even read a story with a plot that is not really that interesting as long as I have character interactions I'm looking forward to...... reply
Honestly I’d talk to them and be honest if I’m uncomfortable. Whether you want to try something or not is your choice, and I believe people should respect each other’s boundaries. If you’re not comfortable with it, you don’t have to do it, even if it’s something they’re interested in it reply
actually I love reading fics that have piss kinks/piss in them, so I'm perfectly fine if my partner wanted to try it out with me, although I feel like I would be reluctant because of how embarrassing it is...
I would be glad that my partner is only into piss and not scat. ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ reply
In my opinion, a story is well-written when the flow is easy to follow, the storyline makes sense, and it keeps you interested enough to continue reading.
But I think it also depends on your perspective and the genre you're reading. For my case, different genres have different standards, so what feels well-written to me might not feel the same to ...... reply
Do you guys like the song "an idle brain invites the devil in" by Salem the musical. I can't really relate to the lyrics but the song has such a nice melody. I also like the song step on me by the cardigans. I think you should listen to it. The song is so relatable and the melody is soooooo nice!
For me it's when girls have the basic straight bangs and long black hair (e.g sawako) Yes they lookpretty but it's just so basic I can appreciate it when they have interesting lore/personality or if their basic appearance has relevance to their backstory but I just dislike it in general, I really can't read a romance where the fl has long black ha...... reply
to me, the main factor is how human the character feels. characters that feel real because their goals, conflicts, and actions arise from a coherent psychological foundation, if you're capable of making me feel for a character and relate the concept of a human to him, I'm sold on the show. I can recognize something being well written while realizin...... 2 reply
For me, it's when the characters are really fleshed out and have clearly been thought through. Like, they each have their own mannerisms, identities, flaws, and how they then in turn interact with the other characters and all of their own complexities makes me really enjoy a story. I don't know, but I just find myself drawn to those types of storie...... reply
ik the haters coming for this one but
- isekai black haired back eyed mls / basic blaack haair im talking nonudnder tonees. like blue red or purple fhat looked chopped as hell witth. tiny head thin ass. legs and thick torso but somerhoww ch thy et a massive uogravr so ppl r like omg hes. hot and ll his bg says "ML" randomly falls in love batshit c...... reply
What actually makes a story “well written” to you? I’ll read something that’s objectively kinda messy, but something about it still allures me and I rate it high, even when other people write it off as bad. So what’s your bar for well written? And if a story isn’t well written, why does it still pull you in anyway?
'Things' are your daily life experiences by which you get to know the world around you. Tell others about the things you did, may it be cool, sad, crazy or funny. You can also find things that you might want to do and a friend to do it with!